Well, for a first timer it was good. I guess I need to familiarize myself with the play since you took inspiration from it. The sex parts were great but then it is Koga so of course it's good :) Kohaku's twisted mentality is good too.
You need to do this more often. Let yourself be twisted by the darkside :)
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Date: 2008-09-22 02:21 am (UTC)Where was I?
Well, for a first timer it was good. I guess I need to familiarize myself with the play since you took inspiration from it. The sex parts were great but then it is Koga so of course it's good :) Kohaku's twisted mentality is good too.
You need to do this more often. Let yourself be twisted by the darkside :)